Tuesday, August 21, 2007

Pro Jihadist puts up a video on live leak...my response

I am going to kill you

All you jihadist
All you smart asses talkin trash
Your world is going to come
Tumbling down in one big bloody crash

You're going to get shot in the head
You're going to get shot in the chest
You're going to go down hard
Courtesy of the best

You're weaklings and brain washed
Your leaders send you off to die
Your fanatics liars and lunatics
You kill your own and don't even cry

The old Iraq attacked Kuwait
The old Iraq attacked Iran
What were your reasons then
What was your great blessed plan

Now you bomb market places
And it's women and children you kill
You've got no place in your heart
That's quiet and peaceful and still

Dying is your only release
Dying is your only way out
You've let your soul be taken over
You have no idea what you’re about

Except mindless selfish horror
Except blinding yourself to the light
That you are not the resistance
You are the cause of the fight

You are the sickness in the body politic
You are the disease and contamination
You don't believe in freedom or choice
You've chosen eternal hell fire damnation

So you can post your videos and comments
But judgment is drawing near
And when the bullet is passing through you
And your mind for the first time goes clear

Don't say nobody told you
Don't pray like it's not too late
For the ravages of unbalanced savages
Will reap their whirl wind of fate

Whether it be by plane or a gun
Whether it be by an SRK knife
Somebody somewhere is going to
Turn you in because they have chosen life

And then your idiot pig vomit ways
Will come to a shrieking halt
And I'd bet till your dying day
You'll always say it's somebody else’s fault

It's already whispered on the wind
It's already like the river running true
There are defenders of the sacred
And they are coming personally for you

And be it

One way or another
Today or some other
Whether it's me or
One of my brothers

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I am going to kill you

All you jihadist
All you smart asses talkin trash
Your world is going to come
Tumbling down in one big bloody crash

You're going to get shot in the head
You're going to get shot in the chest
You're going to go down hard
Courtesy of the best

You're weaklings and brain washed
Your leaders send you off to die
Your fanatics liars and lunatics
You kill your own and don't even cry




Neils
11:00 pm
08/21/2007

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Your poetry sucks.

neilsthepoet said...

I wander

And I ponder
But can not for the life of me
Get to the sheer depth of your
Observation presented so eloquently

The grandeur overwhelms me
I am taken aback by it's daring
How did I ever come to deserve
The genius that you are sharing

You actually spent some time
Purusing through my words
Surely your magnificent presence
Had some of them flitting

Off like birds

They return to me this very evening
They speak softly in my ear
It seems that you are troubled
And have no way past your fear

Perhaps some sort of contest
Of rapiers and wit can take place
Perhaps along the edge of the abyss
You can find your grace

Or at least some solice and
Some very much needed rest
For I can see by your effort
That for you

You have given your very best


Neils
12:48 am
08/23/2007

Anonymous said...

Aimlessly you wander....
And that causes me to ponder
Just what a jackass
You must be....

For your words are aimless...
you points are pointless
And I'd bet a third grader can do better than thee.

So sell your pen and burn paper
Let's put an end to this silly caper.
Because you're no poet.....and we all know it....
Hell....you couldn't give this crap away for free.

Anonymous said...

Perhaps some sort of contest
Of rapiers and wit can take place

neilsthepoet said...

"For your words are aimless...
you points are pointless
And I'd bet a third grader can do better than thee."

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you points are pointless....????

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Ok here it is real real slow.

I don't like the Jihadist.
I don't like them.

I support who kills them.
I would kill them.

And what is it you would do
I mean
but be some lame ass critic?


Hahhhaaaa


Neils
6:39 pm
09/14/2007

Anonymous said...

I can tell you what I wouldn't do dumbass.....I wouldn't waste time posting half assed poetry when it would be much more PLAIN to say what you mean instead of trying to use such treachery as Jihad to give notice to yourself.

If you don't like criticism, maybe you should just stick to saying what's on your mind about Jihadists and other such nasty business and save the poetry to reflect on a good and noble cause. Something that doesn't make you look like an attention seeking asshole who uses limited skills and sensational topics to draw attention to himself.

Just a suggestion....feel free to use it.

neilsthepoet said...

I don't give a damn what you think about my poetry. If you can't get what this poem says simple enough, I'd say the lack lies in you.

You talk like you know anything about poetry....who's your favorite living poet?

I wrote my words because they express how I feel. I don't mind attention...that's why this is in public....but that is not it's sole purpose.

I notice you remain anonomyous and make no real offers of direction.


If I don't like criticizism than I can blah blah blah according to you but I choose my own free thoughts and analysis, that's what allows me to see you as the impertinent impotent little jerk that you are.

Your opinion of me is just that,
Your opinion.

You can subscribe all these motives to me you want but they are not mine merely because you say so.

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So far this has been all about me
with nothing you've offered of yourself as an example.

You don't seem to be much more than a toes dipped depth into these open seas of life,

Come on fess up! You're just a little sneak ankle biter....and that what you do best. That's what you like doing and that's what you put your energy into.

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And that "just a suggestion" part
by you;

How much more direct of a revealing could you offer of your
own non substance.

Here you are with your fake
humility flag flying

"Just a suggestion".....sure.

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You can represent like you're the sold intent of intense common sense.

But so far you're a fake a fraud.
A Poser!!!! A P..o..s..e..r..!!!!


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This area, my blog is for
Lead Follow Die or Get out of the Way kind of stuff

So let's see it.

Let's see your example of a good noble cause presented well.

Time to put up or slink off and shut up.

Get it"!

Did you get that?




Neils
12:00 am
09/17/2007

neilsthepoet said...

Loser!!

You'd think they'd at least come back and correct my spelling...


:)



Neils
7:00 pm
09/14/2007

neilsthepoet said...

Feckin loser...

Loser
Loser
Loser

All this time later
and my first sense was right.

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The killers of free thought
Are everywhere and nowhere

Neils
8:16 am
09/22/2010